verbal flab

[Rich D]

"What dreams may come,
in that long slumber of death,
must give us pause."

What dreams may come,
in that long slumber,
must give us pause."

Which one is taut, and which flabby?

I always said, old Shakey had some talent, but he
could have used an editor with a sharp red pen -

--
Rich

[John W Kennedy]

Post by Rich D
"What dreams may come,
in that long slumber of death,
must give us pause."
What dreams may come,
in that long slumber,
must give us pause."
Which one is taut, and which flabby?
I always said, old Shakey had some talent, but he
could have used an editor with a sharp red pen -

Which one are you pretending to be by Shakespeare?